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Post by fangirl1215 on Dec 18, 2005 21:45:59 GMT -5
My name is Kristen but friends call me Kanami. I am 12 almost 13. i am applying for Hatsuharu( Haru) Sohma he is possed by the spirt of the Ox. he has a white and black side of his emotions when he goes black he acts like a totally different person.My experence i do do fruits basket roleplays and i am either kyo or haru i have been roleplaying for about a month now but i love to role play and getbetter every time.I role play alot i mean allot i am roleplaying for a least 4 hours a day every day.I have Read the manga 1-11( i am waiting for the 12th one) and have watched alittle of the anime.
Haru sat in his classroom half listening to his teacher. After class was over he walked outside and saw kyo, tohru, yuki ,and momiji walking away form the school. he cault up to them" where are you going?" he said to the group. they said back to shigure's house haru walked with them to shigure's house. they sat down as tohru made something for them to eat. she sat the plate on the table an sat down between kyo and yuki. "So tohru when do you work again?" he said trying to break the ice. he looked around as tohru answered " where did sensi go?" he said looking around for shigure. "Yuki said that he was in his office is that true?" he asked tohru. he looked around waiting for an answer.
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Post by Tohru Honda on Dec 18, 2005 21:53:13 GMT -5
Well...I'm afraid I'm going to have to say no. The format was slightly changed, and your spelling wasn't so great. I guess we expect semi literacy, which you do have, but you failed to capitalize names and such so...I'm very sorry to decline you. Feel free to stay on as a member if you want, though!
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Post by Hana on Dec 18, 2005 21:55:14 GMT -5
*Bites lower lip* As much as I hate in rejecting members, I too, must say no. Although I myself, am not a good role-model in this, there were many capitilization errors as well as a spelling error in the title.
;_; I'm very sorry to have to say no.
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Post by Akito-sama on Dec 18, 2005 21:55:37 GMT -5
Hey, I don´t mean to sound rude but...
Your spelling was, well.. bad
Grammar... That´s not too great...
Sentence fluency... Ouch.
((Oops...))
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